The only thing I would think about altering is the hating having girls as friends BC of the drama.
What if she doesn't have many friends BC she likes to keep to herself. BC she finds herself a bit of a loner. But she is friendly with Ger brothers and their friends - hence having mostly guy friends.
Instead of having her 'hate' dresses and 'hate' high heels, and 'hate' girls who fight over guys, you could have her be uninterested and bored with these things.
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