She is a tomboy because of her older brother and likes to be comfortable not because she thinks men are better than women. She doesn't think all girls catfight over boys but she hates the ones that do and it's a fact that girls cause more drama.
Originally Posted by jenfitz
Well I mean, I get the feeling that she thinks girly things are bad. Am I getting that wrong?

And trust me, girls do not cause more drama! There are plenty of women and plenty of men who like to stir up trouble. And you'll probably hear a whole lot about it too, since so many guys only feel comfortable talking about their emotions with girls.

Anyway, what is your story about? Are you writing it for school or just for fun? I like that you gave your character some real flaws, like being stubborn and hot headed, instead of saying that her flaw is "being too perfect."

Last edited by Eilonwy; 11-17-2012 at 11:53 PM.